Feedback and Improvement

Feedback from teacher:
After showing the improved print advertisement to Tom he suggested three improvements that could be made:

- Only use one pin to hold up the images, as the use of four pins is quite busy and visually distracting

- Make sure that the borders (The space between the content and the edge of the print) are the same. Tom suggested using a guideline/ruler on Photoshop, and lifting the 4 posted notes/images to the left higher, so the edge of the bottom image is on the same level as the hashtag line

- He lastly suggested adding Scrimshaws Twitter and/or Facebook details, as their main media channel is social networking

Improvement:
Taking the feedback into consideration, I applied all of Toms points. Here is the improved print advertisement: